SAI/ BFI: Writing Feedback & Be Ok
I had a great session last week with my coursemate Florence Keith-Roach, who provided an excellent first draft. It stuck closely to the structure of her watertight treatment, which I was already a big fan of. “Be Ok” is just my kind of comedy, a buddy story set over twenty four hours about best friends, dead friends, MDMA, growing up and pregnancy. Florence is a real talent to watch, and a pleasure to work with, she has set a high bar, and I’ll be delivering my first draft at the end of July…. which I’m looking forward to talking over with her.